show not tell

 on a Sunday morning there was swands coming for outside I started  shivering I looked outside the windows.  the people were running to the shad people were wearing jackets the trees were moving. I heard the raindrops crashing into the matly.   

Show sentence: The soft sand the water is  blue, the wind is blowing the sand  blowing the trees you can see the islands the waves.

Show sentence: old shoes that the paint came off. the shoes got wet when the rain came down into the shoes on the grawind and they have little holes in it.