In the holiday I saw a movie with my brothers and mum and dad and then
we went to the store to buy a pool then we went back home then we swan
in the pool we had so must fun then we went inside because it was so
cold and then I.
we went to the store to buy a pool then we went back home then we swan
in the pool we had so must fun then we went inside because it was so
cold and then I.
went to play games I had fun and then I saw my friend was playing
games and then I joined my friend we had so much fun.
games and then I joined my friend we had so much fun.
Then my friends came over to my house because they are going
away we had food and we played games and we had so must fun
and then they said they
away we had food and we played games and we had so must fun
and then they said they
went to go now I said bye to my friends. Then I went with my brother
and my mum to the park me and my brother we take our bikes to the
park and then our friends came to the park we played tag it was fun our
friends was so fast then me and my mum and brother went back home.
and my mum to the park me and my brother we take our bikes to the
park and then our friends came to the park we played tag it was fun our
friends was so fast then me and my mum and brother went back home.
Then me and my brother went to the swma in the pool we had fun then we
went back inside because we need to go to school tomorrow.
went back inside because we need to go to school tomorrow.
Hi Mohamed I like the way you did your writing because it felt like I did it.
ReplyDeleteAnd it had a lot of mistakes and the main one was the one at bottom,swma one but it was a great one
See you next time.
From Yug.