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Showing posts with label writing 2019. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing 2019. Show all posts

Tuesday, 12 November 2019

The Trailblazers

Sky Sport came to Point England School. They were talking about the sports we play at school and they were talking about the uniforms. They also talked about making something little into something big. Then they were talking about how much the fees were and giving opportunities to Point England students. Sky Sport is a national news so it played for New Zealand. You can find the video on youtube so people around the world can watch it. We have broken courts and hoops that need to be fixed, but we still make opportunities for ourselves. Precious umpires for the school to make money so she is helping mum pay the bills            

Friday, 30 August 2019

show not tell

 on a Sunday morning there was swands coming for outside I started  shivering I looked outside the windows.  the people were running to the shad people were wearing jackets the trees were moving. I heard the raindrops crashing into the matly.   


Show sentence: The soft sand the water is  blue, the wind is blowing the sand  blowing the trees you can see the islands the waves.

Show sentence: old shoes that the paint came off. the shoes got wet when the rain came down into the shoes on the grawind and they have little holes in it.

Tuesday, 2 July 2019

dragons

Once there was a kid that like dragons win the boy grows up he had a ship he want to islands to find a dragon one day a man came up to him and said you will never find a dragon then the boy said yes to himself then one day he wants to go to the a mountain he went to the mountain he want to go up the mountain then he stopped and sat down he was sad because he wanted to find a dragon but he can't find dragon then he started going up the mountain then a man came said do not go up the mountain there is a dragon the man said you go I will come to you then i'm going to go see something the man said OK i'm going to go down then there is the dragon the dragon was a friendly one the man said run stop going to him no you go down and then the owner came and said do not take him it is my dragon then the owner went to the dragon and het the dragon the man that like dragon said do not het the dragon the man that like the dragon toke the dragon and he went back to his house that is how the dragon was his started to be the man is friend.

troll

There was an island that people want to go to the island one they in the morning a boy saw the island moving north and north is were our island is the boy said i need to say to the people that the island is moving to our island the people said no the island is not moving island can't move the boy said but my brother went to that island the people said go home kid the boy said no i'm not going home you go home ok I do not like you if the island come here im not going to help you ok old man the boy said the man said I do not need your help little kid and i'm not an old man ok kid then every day the boy saw the island every day moving to our island and in the boy room he made a little boat so he can go to the island so he can help his brother he said this is going to be the night so i can go to the island so he waited to night so he can get his boat so he can go the island then a man saw the boy the boy went fast in the boat the man did not want no 1 to go to the island because he did not want the boy to get the boy brother for the island the man did not like the boy brother the man said do not get you brother come back here boy the the boy said why not you took him i get him so what the boy got on the island he looked for his brother then saw a little cave he went into the cave in the cave he saw lift and right he said where do i go left or right the boy said OK i'm going to right because right is always right one two three go he saw some light he ran to the light he saw his brother the boy said we have to go away from here his brother said we can't go because there is no way you can go way from this island the boy said i made a boat we can go away from this island his brother said ok come on go to the boat the boy said to his brother why are we going fast his brother said because the island is going to move ok then we have to go come on the island was moving and the water was going to the island way the boy said i can't go to our island way and then the island came up the island said hello the boy was scared then the island said do not be scared i'm not a bad island the boy said what is your name the island said my name is troll the boy said why are you going to our island the island said i want to have people on me that is why I want to go to your island the boy and his brother said ok i'm going to get people to come to this island the boy said can you take me and my brother to the island so me and him can go get all the people here ok said troll troll took them to the island the boy and his brother went to the people and said we went to the island and the island is named troll and it is not a scar place it is so fun do you want to the island ok then come then get all the people so we can go to troll then everyone said ok then
We came to the island all of the people had fun troll is not bad or this island that's how
ever one liked troll he is not bad.

Thursday, 13 June 2019

The Time travels

            The Time Traveller


In the old days  there was a man he lived in a little house it was too much to get same
mane then and day a man is a time travels said to the man do you want to time travels
to the future the man said yes and then he started working with the time travelers said
it is the day said so we can go to the future we have to go to my house the man said ok
we are her go inside said the time travels in one there her we come future we are in a
house open the door ok wow look at this we need to go back and get the people so we
can live in the future one to three we are back you go waste and i will go east ok come
people come what do you want come look ok we are coming we can all go to the future
we can all have fun and we can leave a good life the people said ok then one man or  
woman at a time ok ok said the people one to their her you go ok do not be scared ok
ok said the people one to three her all of you go to the future ohohoho me and you it is
our time to go to the future one to there open the door one to there woow cool there is
food there is cars there is big house for all of you yes and there is toys for kids to ok
kids yes go ever one.

Tuesday, 28 May 2019

Friday, 24 May 2019

help im lost

If my life were a movie who would I want to play me and why

If my life were a movie who would I want  to play me and why.

I want Cristiano and Ronaldo to play me because his a soccer player and his so good.

and I play soccer like him he gives money to charity.

and he is good it getting goals in a Real life game.

and he likes cars and I like cars like him  

and he run fast and he jump high.

Cristiano and Ronaldo can vs massy and Cristiano and Ronaldo can win.

But massy and Cristiano and Ronaldo are friends.

Cristiano and Ronaldo got 633 goals.

He like to gives money to charity he is the most 1 that gave the most money to charity.

But massy and Cristiano and Ronaldo are good it playing soccer.

Cristiano and Ronaldo wins  Heaps of games in soccer.

Cristiano and Ronaldo likes to play soccer everyday that is way his good.

 

Thursday, 9 May 2019

roller blades

On a autumn morning luke was sitting on the steps and his friends andrew was roller blades andrew said do you not have your on rollerblade no said luke im saving up for a rollerblade but i need so more mr gray said do you want to help me and i'm going to pay you if you help luke said ok i will help you what is the work do i need to do can you rake up all the leaves luke said ok  i will do it this is not hard andrew said i will help you luke luke said ok.then he finish and then we ran back and then he ran as he could and jumped in the pig pile of leaves and he made a mess and mum came and she said what are you doing boys mr gray is coming do it fast luke said hoho no come on do it fast ok mum said luke and they did it as fast as they could and then mr gray came then he said i’ll here is you money thanks for helping me to get my money to get my on roller blades.   

Friday, 3 May 2019

if i could eat one food for the rest of my life


If i could only eat  one food for the rest of my life it is going to be Cheese sandwiches because
it is not bad for your health and you can take it it school and it work you can eat in your car it is
go for you i can eat Cheese sandwiches it home have day I like to eat  Cheese sandwiches
because it is not bad for your health i like it because it is not bad for our health.     

Thursday, 4 April 2019

Way is it important to show respect

Way is it important to show respect


It is important to show respect to people so they can show respect back
to you.
 
and it is so important to show respect to your family you should  respect
your family the most so your family show more respect to you.


and if you want to make friends with people show respect so they can be
your friend.

and if they need help you should help them so if they see you and you
need help they going to help you and you should respect your teachers
it school because they make you learn how to write and read books and
they make you learn how to do mathe Show respect.                                                              

kiwisport

We go to kiwisport so we can play sport and have fun and to learn how to play
sport.


KiwiSport is playing sport and learning new sport ever term and ever year this
term we are learning cricket. we have KiwiSport ever thirstday in the afternoon.
 We have so much fun ever thirstday in the afternoon.


We learned how to  do bowling when your bowl you have to make a ster and
when you went to throw the ball your hand have to be next to your years and then throw the ball and we learned how to beat when you friend throw the ball
it you hit it with your beat  and then you run to the cone if you have time to run
to the second cone.


I learned how to bowl it Pt england school ever thirstday afternoon we go to
kiwisport with our class we learn and we have fun to.


Thank you for the kiwisport  teachers for making us learn how to play sport
and making as have fun. And thank you for Mr Burt to because he let as to
learn how to play sport.

I like to do bowling because i'm so good it bowling.  

Wednesday, 13 March 2019

about me writing

Kia ora my name Is Mohammed and I'm from Palestine. I’m in year 6 and my class  is room 6. Our teacher’s name is Miss Tuiā. I like to eat rice and chicken because of  the chicken with the rice In the weekend I play football with my friends. I like riding my bike and going out with my brothers to the park.