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term 4 Animation Voice Over - Ako 3

this is my term 4 animation plan this the lank for the Animation.

Writing Doc: Keyhole Narrative Part 2

Once upon a time there was two brothers that lived on a mountain. And then the hand house that they lived in and the mountain float like a floating island in the ski and then Revan and Revan brother went out and then they saw that they stuck and then they said what are we going to do and they lived on the floating island for 6 days and then revan brother said i'm going to see if i can do something so we can get of this floating island and revan said ok and revan brother run 3 hours ago revan brother came back and he went to sleep and the next day he run back to do something Revan said what are you doing and Revan brother said do not come in and then Revan went back to the hand house then revan brother run to revan and said it worked revan said what worked plane then they run out now we can get out of this floating island then they went in the plane then they went and this is the end of the stor

naarrative writing plan

Recount Week 2, Term 4

My first day for school I was 6 years old. Then we did lots of fun
there and then my dad came to Take me back home the next day
then i was going to school then my dad came and said today is your
birthday then my dad  said do you want to go to school I said yes I
went to go to school then my dad

Take me to school I went in there was no 1 and I went back to the
car then we went back home there and there was a birthday bart
the I went to the birthday bart it was my birthday and  it was fun
playing with my mum and dad and with my Brostre

And then we all went to bad it  night we woke up and then I went

to woke up my Brostre and we all watched Spongebob then we went to
bed the next day  my dad said we are going to New zealand I was
to xitd then I went to my then we went to the car to go to the
airplane. Then we went in to the airplane I feel scared its my first
time go in a airplane 4h then we are in New zealand we went In a
car then we went to cousin house.

Recount

On sunday, my cousin came to my house Then we played games
Then we went to eta Then we went to watched spongebob a move
Then me and my dad and my mum and my cousin mum and dad
went to the zoo it was so fun than me and my cousin had a ras
then  we went back home then my cousin went to his house
then next day.

I went to his house and it was his birthday I didn't know that was
his birthday it was scared because  I didn't get a present for his
birthday i was scared and then i went back to my house and
this is the end.                  

cave drawing auimatiou

this is my animation plan

Intro to Term 4 Writing - planning and writing doc.

Welcome back to my blog!  This morning is the first day of school. This term the topic is Te Wa Toi.  We are learning about drawing. Do you like drawing? I like drawing, it’s fun. This term we will have fun and we are going to do painting not just drawing.  I am excited about this term because I will get a chance to practice my drawing skills and painting too

Points of View: Planning and Writing Doc.

erm 3 Animation Voice Over-Ako 3

Writing Doc: Keyhole Narrative

Once upon a time there was a man that lived in a cave on the mountain. Then he saw a big
storm coming and then he went inside the cave then it started raining. Then he heard a sound
coming from outside the cave then he went outside to see where  is this sound is coming from
then he saw a villain.

Then yasuo grabbed his sword from the cave then he was trying to kill the villain then he saw heaps of villains coming on the mountain. He didn’t know what to do so he went inside the cave. Then he trained so he could fight the villains. He trained everyday then he heard another sound 

coming inside the cave.

yasuo saw a zombie. yasuo killed the zombie with his sword. yasuo went outside to see all the villains he went back inside the cave because he was angry. Then he didn’t know what to eat. Then a man came to the cave and he told yasuo What are you doing in the cave by yourself.

The man said this is my home. He asked him if he had anything to eat and he said no. Then he gave him some food. Then he ate the food then he said i have to live with you. The the man said to him take this sword you will have to use this there are heaps of villains down the mountain then he said we have to train every day to fight the villains, then we can save the world.

The man made a stone shield so the villains can’t hurt him. The next day they ate and they heard sounds coming from the village and then they went to see what that sound. The saw the villains in the village. He said go get the swords and shield.



Then they killed some but some more came.He told the man to take the people to go back to the cave. He saw heaps of villains coming so he ran back to the cave with the people. They didn’t have anything to eat, the man said we need to do something. Him and his friend went to the village and got food for the people then they ate.

then there was another storm coming. There weren’t enough beds to sleep on. The people slept on the floor and the storm was raining and cold. The people didn’t know how to sleep. The next day it stopped raining and it was sunny outside and the sun started coming he went up the mountain and he went to see the village. And there were still heaps of villains in the village. 

said to his friend we need to save the village so the people can get they homes back. it night
yasuo and his friend went to the village to kill the villains they went and kill the villains one by one. and yasuo and his friend saw a pig air plane then they went in the air plane and they saw villains in the air plane then yasuo kill the villains.



then they saw a pig villain in the air plane then yasuo said we cant kill this pig villain then they went and get the people so they can help yasuo and his friend to kill the pig villains and then they can be save and then the people said to yasuo and yasuo is friend you can lave in the village withe us. and that was the end of the villains.